Michelle Tandler on Health

Anybody else not able to sleep because they are so upset about this pending Lowell decision? Never in my life could I have imagined that SF would be so radical as to essentially rip out one of its crown jewels and throw it in the trash.

374 likes53 repliesPosted Feb 2, 2021

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