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SB1047 is not the right path. This bill, as it stands, could gravely harm California’s ability to retain its AI talent and remain the location of choice for AI companies. We hope Sen. Wiener chooses a path that protects startups and open source AI. t.co

370 likes36 repliesPosted Jun 21, 2024

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Viral score

Based on absolute engagement — the platform doesn’t expose follower counts here, so large accounts score higher.

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Why it worked

Leads with a specific number, which is concrete enough to be worth a second of attention.
Follows a clear Hook → Context → Landing shape, so the reader always knows where they are.
Ends on a short line that is easy to quote and repeat.
The opening line stands alone, so it reads completely before the post is expanded.
Written from experience rather than as advice, which is harder to argue with.
Short enough to read in full without expanding, which removes a step before the point lands.

The mechanics

Hook: Leads with a number
Structure: Hook → Context → Landing
Style: Conversational paragraphs at a steady pace.
Tone: punchy, corporate
Written for: People building with AI

Analysis by ViralLoop — not written by the original author.

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