Phoenix Group on General

When was the last time you thought about the kind of future you want? We know that for many people retirement will look different than it did 50 years ago. But pensions haven’t caught up. We’ve been thinking about how pensions should change & we have a plan of how to get there.

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Why it worked

Opens with a question, so the reader starts answering before they have decided to read.
The opening line stands alone, so it reads completely before the post is expanded.
Written from experience rather than as advice, which is harder to argue with.
Short enough to read in full without expanding, which removes a step before the point lands.
Short sentences keep the pace up, so the reader never has to re-read a line.

The mechanics

Hook: Opens with a question
Structure: Hook → Turn
Style: Conversational paragraphs at a steady pace.
Tone: corporate
Written for: Founders, marketers and operators

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